Gutter therapy
General fiction – medium to heavy themes – 27 pages – under 10 mins – Flash required
General fiction – medium to heavy themes – 27 pages – under 10 mins – Flash required
Ashley usually avoided her father's three-car garage because the machinery lurking in the gloom and dust created disturbing shapes that played evil games with her eyes. But when she wanted to disappear, those dim, dubious forms became valuable friends. Read this short story...
[...] The Director of DASI has demanded that I publish my short stories on this journal. Some of these stories are related to the operation, but most I do for fun. But the operation has decided that they own everything I do and I have to publish it. Whatever. Here’s the first one. It’s bigger here. [...]
Black leather and purple tint at Chab Gassie
4 Jul 09 at 6:01 am
I like it chab…The verbal exp. is great and makes you think…where does grief and compulsory habit cross over…I know of two sites that have grown with gifts of toys and more pictures over years. both bring out different emothions each time I see them, sometimes it is compassion, sometimes its impatience. I still think the sneaky bit about dad at the begining and the revelation about him at the end is a bit sneaky. How come this DASI mob own your work? This is worth publishing or at least entering into a quality short story comp.
pat
5 Jul 09 at 6:30 am